RE: I have prepared a complementary website audit report.

Hi there!
From time to time we peruse the internet looking for certain websites like yours that don't rank as well as they could for certain targeted keyword phrases. For those sites we prepare a free Audit report or analysis showing you several things you can do to help improve these results significantly.
Would you like to see it?
There's no cost or strings attached whatsoever- it's completely free- and I would email it to you in around a week.
I think you'll like it a lot and I can guarantee you dramatically improved Google rankings if you follow my instructions.
Please let me know and thanks again in advance.
Sincerely,
Sally Campbell

RE: Proposal with Audit report.

Hi, I noticed that your website is not ranking as well as it could be for certain keywords that I assume you're targeting - particularly in your local area. With your permission I would like to send you an Audit report showing you a few things which can improve these search results for you. These things are not difficult, and my report will be very specific. It will show you exactly what needs to be done to move you up in the rankings dramatically. Would that be okay? It would take me around a week or so to put together. Please let me know. Thanks in advance! Isabelle Edwards