RE: Grab Your Xmas Offers!

Hello,

I noticed that your website isn't ranking as well as it should be for certain keywords in your industry. I'd like to take the time to talk to you about the keywords your successful competitors are using and how we can get you the same results.

Please let me know if you are interested so I can send you a report and proposal.

Thanks
Cathy Williams

RE: Once you see my report, you will know exactly what needs to be done with no room for error.

Hi,
I happened to come across your website recently. Are you aware that your website could be ranking much higher on Google for certain targeted keyword phrases?
It's really simple and I'll be happy to show you how to do it.
I will put my analysis together and email it to you. In my report I will show you very specifically some things you can be doing on your own to dramatically improve your search results for certain targeted keyword phrases.
Once you see my report, you will know exactly what needs to be done with no room for error.
What do you think? Would it be ok to email you my analysis Report of your website?
Please let me know.
Thanks in advance!
Jon Peters